Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Bounce Bounce By Paradisaically, Charlottesville, VA More by this author It became a simple miss I fell – broken neck. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 4 comments. Post your own! Report abuse poeticlove143 said... May 9 at 1:24 pm: a haiku is about nature but i honestly liked it a lil bit Report abuse nelehjr said... Mar. 15 at 1:35 pm: I don't quite understand it. Think I like it though... Report abuse 411Ellie said... Mar. 9 at 7:46 pm: I am so proud of you!! It is rare to get an editors' choice award the first time around! (This is your first haiku, right?) You are destined for greatness! 5/5! WIth love, Ellie Paradisaically replied... Mar. 9 at 8:42 pm : Aw, Ellie! You are the sweetest! It is my first haiku. Thank you so much!!