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Love is Key

A heart frozen stiff-
Melts not from smoldering rage;
Only by warm love.



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Ang_loveeeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 7:07 pm:
I really love the phrase, 'smoldering rage'. It jumps out at you
 
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moderndayEmilyDickinsonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 12 at 10:26 am:
I'm glad your poem has comments! Becasue it's really wonderful, just like you are! Short as it may be, it's still powerful! I love your poem! Keep on writing! I'm cheering for you! Thank you, for sharing this! This helped a lot! ^_^
 
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Sparrow01This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 9 at 12:59 pm:
I really love this :) there's so much truth in so few words, beautiful
 
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TaylorWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 3 at 10:08 am:
Oh that is beautiful. Just mystifying. I don't know if mystifying is the accurate word, but I just got that vibe from this poem. Mystifying. Really nice. And PS I love how your title matches the pic. (:
 
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WOWritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 28 at 3:12 pm:
Short but sweet :)
 
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Luv4EverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 24 at 3:25 pm:
naturally elegant. terrific
 
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mollybug14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 7 at 6:14 pm:
A simple poem that says a lot. Very good haiku. 5 stars :)
 
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Love2Read72This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 1 at 10:20 am:
Simple and elegant. Beautiful.
 
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HellishRequiemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 1 at 10:05 am:
so much said in so few words...nice poem
 
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ansem_unlimited said...
Mar. 23 at 5:59 pm:
I can't claim to be knowledgable in haikus, but the other aspects of it like flow, and word choice were well designed, and delicate
 
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RosalynneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 18 at 12:50 pm:
Wow... that was beautiful. Smoldering... I love that word.  
 
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411Ellie_ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 17 at 9:57 am:
I love it! Impecable word choice! 5/5 stars :-)
 
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Hanban12This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 13 at 6:18 pm:
Gorgeous description! I love your comparison between warm love and smoldering rage; I think that's a beautiful way to put it. It's to the point and simple, the way poetry is meant to be. Awesome job! :)
 
NobuoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 9 at 7:44 pm :
you're good at haikus  
 
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