The Smoker

November 29, 2013
By 411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank


Exorcist addicts
Watch dark spirits rise from lit
Cigarettes, entranced.



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on Mar. 12 2014 at 9:38 pm
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Thank you so much! You are a brilliant writer as well <3

on Mar. 12 2014 at 9:37 pm
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Wow, thank you! 

on Mar. 11 2014 at 11:30 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

u write amazing poetry! especially haikus!

on Mar. 9 2014 at 11:27 pm
CassidieMatti BRONZE, Rochester Hills, Michigan
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Normally not a fan of most haikus for some reason but I really do enjoy yours and especially this one. Amazing job with the word choice as well

on Feb. 24 2014 at 9:12 pm
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Thank you! >L<

on Feb. 6 2014 at 3:33 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

Awesome, just awesome. You amaze me once again with your entrancing style. Well done, and PLEASE keep writing!      

on Jan. 6 2014 at 3:17 am
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Thanks you two :)

on Jan. 6 2014 at 3:17 am
411Ellie PLATINUM, Fridley, Minnesota
41 articles 28 photos 235 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Paper is more patient than people." –Anne Frank

Awwww thanks Saphira! :D I am sooooo happy right now! Your fan, Lexy

on Dec. 11 2013 at 2:00 am
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

And I am entranced by these words of yours. Such beautiful craftsmanship. You'll go real far with Haiku I tell you. I don't know what else to say. :P   Love always, Saphira

hieverybody said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 5:10 pm
hieverybody, Shoreview, Minnesota
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So do i this is wonderful!!!!!

hieverybody said...
on Dec. 10 2013 at 5:10 pm
hieverybody, Shoreview, Minnesota
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A. Lopez loves this :) 


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