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The First Sign of Spring

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The rain falls into
The desire of the forest
Landing on the plants

Creeping down their backs
And collecting on the leaves
Flouting to the ground

The extra drops go
Inhaled through the root’s nostrils
With their full bellies

The plants start to sigh
And their pleasure starts to show
The first sign of spring



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MistyVentureThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 7, 2013 at 11:13 am:
I've read all of your poems and you are really good! I like the style you push the reader into so that they get the same feeling you are trying to convey in the poem! Very powerful.
 
CrazySissiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 7, 2013 at 2:39 pm :
Thank you, I like urs too! Das ist kewl!!!!!!! :)
 
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