Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Sunflower Sunflower By Mckay, Somewhere, VA More by this author the heavens, hoping, someday, God might notice you. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 9 comments. Post your own! Report abuse TheSkyOwesMeRain said... today at 1:23 am: I love this, and the message it conveys. It's really hard for me to write meaningful haikus, but I think you did a really great job here. I can relate so much :) Report abuse Jade.I.Am said... Aug. 9 at 11:28 am: This is really deep, and I love the metaphor. And it's very relatable :) Now that I think about it, I need to do some catching up on your work. Off to do that! See ya :P Mckay replied... Aug. 12 at 5:02 pm : Thanks, mah pimp. By the way, I need to do the same with your work. Thank you. Report abuse LexusMarie said... Aug. 1 at 1:32 am: Hey brah! Thanks for all the wonderful comments you've left the past few days, as always I appreciate them very much and they truly do make my day! I have been reading so many flower poems lately, why have I never written one? Anyways, this first off reminded me of the book I told you I'm reading, Mythology. In the love stories when people die and they bleed, the blood spots leave the earth and turn into beautiful flowers. And it's sad, but the stories have really stuck with me, just... (more ») Mckay replied... Aug. 1 at 6:12 pm : Thank you, thanks, merci, gracias, ty, 謝謝, dank u, danke, σας ευχαριστώ, buíochas a ghabháil leat, grazie, gratias agimus tibi, obrigado, brah. Report abuse ChrisJ said... Jul. 30 at 6:03 pm: Well, I recognize this work, and think that it is very well done. And I really like the message that you convey here, it reached out to me. Yeah, so good job and please keep writing! Mckay replied... Jul. 31 at 2:09 pm : Thank you so much, ChrisJ, for the encouragement and for the feedback. I promise to continue writing. Labradorian replied... Aug. 1 at 8:11 pm : I'm no deity, (although I am another person) and I, however insignificant, join with ChrisJ to recognize your talent in writing this very simple, very articulate poem. I enjoyed the read. Mckay replied... Aug. 2 at 4:24 pm : I'm honored that you think so. Truly. Thank you.