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The Perfect Shape

June 27, 2013
By Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou


I love when your lips
form into that perfect shape:
the “I love you” shape.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 5:31 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Took me a while to envision it too. Thanks. I appreciate the feedback.

HazelGrace said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 4:22 pm
Hmmm. The more I read it the more I appreciated and loved its unqiue image. Way to accomplish a lot with 17 syallables. You don't really ever see someone envisioning the lip shape of "I love you" but the originality is what makes this good. Nice work :)

Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 16 2013 at 3:02 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

^u^ Thanks. Took me a while to come up with that. 

on Jul. 12 2013 at 6:26 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

Cute :D I love the "I love you" shape ^_^ Ingenious haiku! I hereby tip off my checkered fedora to you.


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