Wild Girl

May 2, 2013
By Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas


They say "draw in the-
lines", what if I don't want to?
I will be WILD


The author's comments:
Came to me in my sleep....no, just kidding. Made it up in the process of falling asleep. Please tell me what you think of me and be honest!!! I can take it!

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on Jun. 7 2013 at 11:14 pm
SincerelyManon GOLD, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Memories are the only things that don't change when everything else does.

Short but sweet and that makes me love it even more:)

Ishara BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2013 at 7:36 am
Ishara BRONZE, Colombo, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Life is more fun when colored outside the lines

Love it. It's simple and easy to relate to :) Great job :)

on May. 21 2013 at 10:53 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
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I couldn't help it the moment I read this I laughed a little to myself. I love it :D. It's simple, funny and in some way couragous. Write on :). 

OldYoungOne said...
on May. 8 2013 at 7:34 pm
iT VERY RANDOM LOL

on May. 7 2013 at 1:28 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

Hey, no offense Liv, but it truly sounds so comical when you say "I can take it." Well then we all can too...but when something's great it great maybe even awesome we'll say cause ..well- this is about me when I like something ... I like it and that's it. And I love this. That's so exactly how I feel sometimes ... I mean maybe if truth be told all the time, but rarely can BE that..

on May. 6 2013 at 11:55 pm
Cutey-Beauty SILVER, Ulaanbaator, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Soli Deo Gloria.

Everyone can totally relate to this haiku at one point in their lives or another :D awesome!

Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 6 2013 at 1:35 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The "drawn in lines" line is the best part of the poem. I feel like it isn't only talking about girls solely but of teenagers—or on a bigger scope, people who feel oppressed by society's set stanards. It's okay to be unique—to let loose and be wild occassionally. Great haiku, Liv. 


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