Potential Poet Problems

April 27, 2013
By interSTELLAR BRONZE, Aiken, South Carolina
interSTELLAR BRONZE, Aiken, South Carolina
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It is hard to place
Seventeen good syllables
Into one tiny hai-

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on May. 3 2013 at 2:02 pm
transparantspirit434 PLATINUM, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
I will never leave thee, nor forsake thee. -Hebrews 13:5

#1 reason they are annoying Thank you.

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on May. 2 2013 at 1:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love this poem. I love what you did at the end. Very creative and playful. 5 stars.


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