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Only Cold

Wind shrieks through the trees
Dancing, slipping through the leaves
Leaving only cold



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CanadotasThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 6:29 pm:
This poem is really ingenius! I love how simple the concept is, yet how much meaning this can have. Great job!
 
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E.J.MathewsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 27, 2013 at 4:36 pm:
Love the imagery! Even though it was a haiku, I felt like I was there and I could feel the wind!
 
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KRKluns said...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 8:46 pm:
This is a great poem! It reminds me of where I live in the winter! We have really cold weather.
 
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