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nice dream/birds on a wire/top of the rock

April 16, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius

it was a nice dream;
you were climbing a mountain
and you didn’t fall.

your hair had grown out
you laughed like birds on a wire
nimbly balancing

on Top of the Rock
high away and far asleep
you reminded me.

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on Apr. 20 2013 at 12:17 pm
annafranna BRONZE, Eldersburg, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened." ~Dr. Seuss

Such a cool poem!  I love the dreamy mood it incorporates.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:39 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Absolutely love the titile. Why shouldn't they be long once in while? :) You're always posted amazing work. Keep it up, MyApocalytic.