Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Diamond Girl Diamond Girl By EPluribusUnum, Woodbine, MD More by this author off wind burnt hair. She smiles, star bits in her eyes. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 5 comments. Post your own! Report abuse SaphiraBrightscales said... Apr. 21, 2013 at 11:37 am: Gosh! I just love all these words! I mean every single one! Really! This is breath-taking! She woud LOVE it! Do tell me when you show her, if you do! :D Good Luck! EPluribusUnum replied... Apr. 21, 2013 at 6:13 pm : Thank you sao much! Your reaction means a lot to me! :D I'm really glad you like my writing! :3 Report abuse Mckay said... Apr. 18, 2013 at 12:37 pm: I love the image you convey in this haiku with you descriptive words: "star bits in her eyes." Well done. Have you showed her this piece yet? EPluribusUnum replied... Apr. 19, 2013 at 11:19 am : Thank you! I haven't shown her yet. I'm not really sure if I will or not, I try to be careful with delicate friend group dynamics, but... She's so sweet ahhhhh! X3 Mckay replied... Apr. 22, 2013 at 3:40 pm : You should. Tell her how you feel. Don't deny yourself. Hey, she might feel the same way about you; you never know. Don't live life regretting the moments that pass so briefly. Later on you'll always ask yourself, What if...? Then, tell me what happens. I'm routing for you!