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Senryu

Floating face down
in the pool; nobody noticed
her struggle to swim



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SaphiraBrightscalesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 1:47 pm
Hey! That reminds me of the duckling... The way it appears to be so calm while under the water it's rapidly paddling with it's webbed feet; A nicely written Haiku! I like it! 
 
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