Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Indian summer Indian summer By Einahpets, weston, CO More by this author my last memmory is him and distant thunder « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 2 comments. Post your own! Report abuse KnitsandPurls said... Feb. 17, 2013 at 1:09 pm: This is a beautiful, strong example of a haiku. The syllable structure is exactly right, which you don't see in a lot of the haikus on this site. The personification is simple yet powerful. Overall, this is a wonderful piece. I do have a piece of advice, but it is a very small and nit-picky thing. I would add a period to the end of the last line. This would ground the poem more, if you know what I mean. It would also give the poem a definite ending. P.S. I have a ... (more ») Einahpets replied... Mar. 4, 2013 at 3:31 pm : Thanks, I'll check it out.