At the mouth, her quest
begins and reaches fullness
at the knowing eyes.
begins and reaches fullness
at the knowing eyes.
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Hey Saphira! Ummmmmmm sorry for replying soo late, and I know that this isn't replying, it's just that I can't see any of the comments!!! I mean like right now I still can't, and it only happens on your work and it dives me crazy cuz your sooo nice and I really like to chat!!! Sorry, for the late reply, just wanted to let you know that I TRiED! haha oh well, i emailed them a while ago so we will see what happens :( as for now.......Keep rockin!
Another amazing haiku!!! (sorry, im sucha creeper, i just love your stuff) Great job, I love every aspect. Beautiful, simple, poignent. Love, love love! Keep rockin Saphira!
Hey!! No you're not.. You're actually suddenly becoming one of my fav. people around here AND not cause you read my stuff NO... Because I read a lot of your feedback on other people's stuff too and LIv, you're always so encouraging and honest and nice and I alway love the way you never forget to use your pet sentence "Keep rocking!" This one time, I'll say it to you, this awesome person, Keep rocking!
Mckay
I like how something so little can inspire you to create something so simple yet so deep. I too wrote a haiku on smiling, mind reading it? This is very good.
Of course not. I'm going to read a whole lot of stuff by you today. Get ready to receive a ton of feedback my dear Mckay!
Wow, such deep interpretation,,,...I guess I had a simpler thing in mind ,, yours fits a lot too, especially with the words "Knowing eyes" in it...ANd THANK YOU! Thank you!
JoPepperWhen I read this it makes me think of a guy who is in love with a girl, who always seems sad, but he treasures the few times he's ever seen her smile because it's absolutely beautiful. I liked the "quest" comparison because it sometimes does feel like a quest trying to smile! So great job! xD
haha, I guess I accidentally posted the reply up there...LOL..
StarlitSunriseAw, this is great! I have never thought about a smile as a quest, but I loved the way you discribed it!
EPluribusUnumThis is so sweet!
Gee Thank YOU!! Thank you for reading and for the feedback... :)))
RarelyJadedThis was really cool. I like it, and though it was simple it was powerful! If a smile reaches the eyes it's a happy smile, lol. Totally love it!
Oh thank YOU! That's what I think and that's why I put it in there, like if the smile just stays to the teeth, and doesn't light up the face, it's definitely faked....OH and Thanks so much for reading it too!! :D SO glad you like it.
CoolBSami love the comparison
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