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An incredible
inspiration blown away
like autumn leaves





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DawnieRae said...
Jul. 22, 2013 at 4:11 pm
I love this poem!!! I love it love it LOVE IT!!
 
Laugh-it-Out This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 4, 2013 at 12:53 pm
Omg awesome job!!!! Tou rock! Love this sooo much keep rockin, and yeah I remember u too €
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 5, 2013 at 11:22 am
OHH Thank You Liv!! And I'm happy that you do :DD Ever so happy.
 
Laugh-it-Out This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 5, 2013 at 6:36 pm
Hahahaha I feel like tere are regulars  and then other people, I'm totally a regular and I think you are too. I kinda memorize the names I see a lot of :) Aren't you like firends with Mckay???
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 7, 2013 at 12:52 pm
Yeah me feels that way too :P... ANd yes,, Mckay's one of  my besties on TI. !!
 
Laugh-it-Out This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 16, 2013 at 9:00 pm
Yeah, Mckay's like my bestie too :) But hey, your're turning into one of my favs!!!! Any way.....great work: Keep rockin
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 25, 2013 at 5:29 am
You HAVE turned into one of my favourites :)))
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 5:06 pm
YES! I so can relate to this. Great job by the way.
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 4:00 am
Thank YOU! ..I see you've read most of my Haiku...You like Haiku? Read "Smile", that's the one I like most of mine. Hoping you like it too :D
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 3:42 pm
I sure will.
 
JoPepper said...
Mar. 7, 2013 at 7:22 pm
I hate when a brilliant idea is blown away!  Great job! xD
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 10:48 pm
Which one us doesn't? :P  Thank YOU!! <3
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 10:51 pm
* of us                  
 
JoPepper replied...
Mar. 9, 2013 at 5:45 pm
You're welcome xD
 
EPluribusUnum This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 10:25 pm
Gods, I hate it when that happens!
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 14, 2013 at 10:34 pm
Don't you?? and especially when one of your friends was the one who provided the interruption... :P
 
EPluribusUnum This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 3:49 pm
Or when I go and get distracted by the internet :P
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 15, 2013 at 11:32 pm
Yea, ,, LOL...      :D
 
thatunknownthing This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 5:49 am
I like the imaery in this haiku, but autumn leaves ofcourse, for this sort of a comparisn, are quite a cliche. not very innovative. i liked that autumn 'leaves' could be both the plural of 'leaf' or the seasons changing. 3/5  
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 1:03 pm
LOL, see what I did there?....ANyway Thank you so much for taking the time out to read this plus yea I guess it's a cliche ....I'll try to more innovative next time but this was my second try on haiku so I guess I was merely trying to put something simple yet an original inpiration into that 5,7,5. Oh, and Thanks!
 
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