The oppressed

January 2, 2013
By wordweaver1999 SILVER, Oakland, California
wordweaver1999 SILVER, Oakland, California
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is a man's own mind, not his enemy or foe, that lures him to evil ways. -Buddha


Trees rustle and sway
Their eyes revealing despair
Facing the city


The author's comments:
My first haiku, feedback is appreciated!

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on Jan. 6 2013 at 12:31 am
wordweaver1999 SILVER, Oakland, California
7 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is a man's own mind, not his enemy or foe, that lures him to evil ways. -Buddha

    thx guys!

Ailsa GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 2:22 pm
Ailsa GOLD, Marietta, Georgia
12 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you have eliminated the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth" - Arthur Conan Doyle

It took me a moment to get, i like it. it made me smile :)

on Jan. 5 2013 at 10:34 am
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
42 articles 9 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

I like the imagery and how mysterious it appears to be.  Nice work on it!


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