September 23, 2012
Never outside them,
Everything I do always,
Inside the lines

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Iloveme This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 10:52 am
I should tell you this is very deep. It can be interpreted in so many ways! Love it, so insightful
48Dragonwriter said...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 9:29 am
I have to agree with mystsyksuniverse on that its really short and I don't get any emotion or background from it
mystyksuniverse said...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 10:06 pm
This is very short so i don't get much emotion from it, but perhaps the length adds to the meaning. Does it mean you feel restricted or does it mean you enjoy your structure? Clarify or your readers will make assumptions
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