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Only so many ways to say sorry

I'm really sorry
I'd take it back if i could
I was way to harsh

I did'nt mean it
I regret what i have said
It was a mistake

That's not what i ment
The words came out really wrong
Can you forgive me?



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smileykin234 said...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 7:02 pm:
Neat, i like it
 
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BlueSunsetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 29, 2012 at 8:35 am:
Simple, but nice. Although, you could've corrected your haiku as it's so short, that's the only negative thing I have to say. All in all, like Maddyo said: it's really easy to connect with. :) x
 
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Maddyo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 27, 2012 at 9:26 pm:
Nice poem. Really easy to connect with.
 
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