Smoking took over,
wrapped my dad in black, and laid
him in a coffin.
wrapped my dad in black, and laid
him in a coffin.
writer3499
WOW this is great! Even when this is only a couple of lines it tells such a story! Amazing! Would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks!
Johnny99I'm always amazed at the amount of emotion and thought that can be cramed into such little space.
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