August 27, 2012
Smoking took over,
wrapped my dad in black, and laid
him in a coffin.

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writer3499 said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 3:36 pm
WOW this is great! Even when this is only a couple of lines it tells such a story! Amazing! Would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks!
Johnny99 said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 10:19 pm
I'm always amazed at the amount of emotion and thought that can be cramed into such little space.
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