Ignorant Flower

Pure Stargazer
Grown into the world as clean as the driven snow
Your silk soft petals untainted by the blood of the broken
Pure Stargazer
I envy your ignorance
Unknowing of the worlds torturous ways must be bliss
You sit and soak in the crisp summer sun
Pure Stargazer





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KnitsandPurls said...
Sept. 1, 2012 at 1:28 pm
As I understand it haiku format is: 5 syllables 7syllables 5 syllables This poem, while very good, didn;t match that format at all. However, it is a beaufitul piece of work.
 
The_Shadow_Executioner replied...
Sept. 8, 2012 at 5:37 pm
Thank you :) I couldn't remember the order of syllables in a haiku, I appretiate the reminder :D
 
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