The Ache of Never Forgetting MAG

August 18, 2012
By Birdsong PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
Birdsong PLATINUM, Vancouver, Other
38 articles 1 photo 7 comments

The perfume you left
has since changed colors; still I
can't bear touching it.



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isuess GOLD said...
on Oct. 18 2016 at 2:25 am
isuess GOLD, Oakland, California
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Favorite Quote:
"You must not ever stop being whimsical. And you must not, ever, give anyone else the responsibility for your life."

I absolutely love how short and filled to the brim this is.

KylieV SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2013 at 10:44 pm
KylieV SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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This poem is a good example of show don't tell. Who is the author talking about? Who's perfume is it? Why can't you touch it? It leaves the audience with questions but I think it also reveals a great story. Great poem! 

on Dec. 19 2012 at 9:12 am
intothegreatperhaps BRONZE, Boerne, Texas
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Beautifully written, simple, and meaningful. I love this. 


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