The Ache of Never Forgetting This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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The perfume you left
has since changed colors; still I
can't bear touching it.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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isuess said...
Oct. 18, 2016 at 2:25 am
I absolutely love how short and filled to the brim this is.
 
KylieV This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 6, 2013 at 10:44 pm
This poem is a good example of show don't tell. Who is the author talking about? Who's perfume is it? Why can't you touch it? It leaves the audience with questions but I think it also reveals a great story. Great poem! 
 
intothegreatperhaps This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 19, 2012 at 9:12 am
Beautifully written, simple, and meaningful. I love this. 
 
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