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The noise of the seagulls,
the wind blowing in your face,
walking by the sea.




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JettaWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 2:28 pm:
I've tried to write poems about the beach many times, but have never successfully performed the task. This poem is an example of what I want to do... It seems like it was SO easily written, and the words flow together impeccably. It's like they could be threaded on a string. I lovethe imagery. If there was one thing I would change, it would be the first line. Maybe instead of the noise of the seagulls, you could come up with a synonym of noise. I think that would make i... (more »)
 
ChoirgirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 28, 2013 at 6:35 pm :
Thanks for the feedback.  I really appreciate it.
 
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albinotiger said...
Jul. 22, 2012 at 5:41 pm:
i can totally realte ( hate seagulls)
 
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