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Laughter plagues my thoughts.
The sky decides on weeping.
The laughter moves on.

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writer3499 said...
Aug. 11, 2012 at 12:47 pm:
I really like it! It's intense in only a few words...great job!! Would you mind reading some of my stuff?
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WishfulDoerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 14, 2012 at 6:54 pm:
This poem is interesting...I think it's a bit jumbled, and if you tweaked it a bit, it would be absolutely fantastic. And the title doesn't really go with the context of the writing, but that's not a huge deal. Overall it's pretty good!
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