Laughter plagues my thoughts.
The sky decides on weeping.
The laughter moves on.
The sky decides on weeping.
The laughter moves on.
writer3499
I really like it! It's intense in only a few words...great job!! Would you mind reading some of my stuff?
WishfulDoerThis poem is interesting...I think it's a bit jumbled, and if you tweaked it a bit, it would be absolutely fantastic. And the title doesn't really go with the context of the writing, but that's not a huge deal. Overall it's pretty good!
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