Never heard

July 1, 2012
By awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
awesomelyme GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Akthough the truth may hurt, not knowing is the worst kind of punishment.


I scream, no one hears.
I cry yet I'm put on mute.
Screams, always ignored.


The author's comments:
Life is my true inspiration as it is every ones.

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on Jun. 26 2014 at 9:04 am
CynthiaFeathers ELITE, Frisco, Texas
125 articles 42 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who is bound to a star does not turn back.
Leonardo Di Vinci

You see I'm a bit of a poet, and you did not know it! What!?
~Sir Percy Blakeney

It is wonderful how you put so much feeling into only 17 syllables.

on Jun. 26 2014 at 9:03 am
CynthiaFeathers ELITE, Frisco, Texas
125 articles 42 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who is bound to a star does not turn back.
Leonardo Di Vinci

You see I'm a bit of a poet, and you did not know it! What!?
~Sir Percy Blakeney

It is amazing how you put so much feeling into 17 syllables. 

on Aug. 29 2012 at 8:43 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
22 articles 0 photos 281 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The goal isn't to live forever, but create something that will."
"If you wanna go, baby let's go; if you wanna rock, I'm ready to roll.''
"No one ever said it'd be easy. They just said it'd be worth it." <3

Great Job! I love that, "put on mute."

on Jul. 24 2012 at 8:09 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

very powerful and amazing

on Jul. 24 2012 at 1:13 pm
CelestaCuffrig GOLD, Loveland, Colorado
11 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Inspiration is only as enlightening as you are open to it."

Very powerful 17 syllables (: Haikus can be tricky as far as innovation goes... Lovely job! Check out my works, pretty please? KEEP IT UP.

on Jul. 23 2012 at 7:44 pm
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
16 articles 1 photo 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's like she sees the diamond underneath And she's polishin' you 'til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)
If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

i really liked it its really good...

on Jul. 23 2012 at 1:01 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
18 articles 0 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

I tend to agree with most people. Short, but powerful.

I, myself, have never read a haiku on here, but now, reading yours, I think I want to look up more. :)

Check out my stories Whispers, Maximum Ride: The Final Chapter, Forbidden, and then Pushed Over the Edge when it comes out please!


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on Jul. 23 2012 at 8:13 am
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.

This is short, which I usually don't like, but it conveys such a strong message that I find myself really liking it. Good job!

zendaya said...
on Jul. 23 2012 at 7:57 am
this is really good its how i feel a lot maily when i am feeling depressed i rally like it

on Jul. 22 2012 at 4:38 pm
Allicat001 SILVER, Waukesha, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 171 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is not someone you can live with, love is someone you can't live without."

"Always stand up for what's right even if that means you're standing alone."

So short but so powerful, amazing job:)

on Jul. 18 2012 at 10:47 pm
_betweenthelines_ BRONZE, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
4 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream."- Edgar Allan Poe

I love that it conveys so much emotion in so little words :)

 


RobbieM BRONZE said...
on Jul. 18 2012 at 10:08 pm
RobbieM BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
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great haiku!  My one critique is that you repeat the idea of unnoticed anguish through screaming in two lines.  If you had screaming in the first line, crying in the second line, and perhaps some third emotional outburst in the third, I think your haiku would be exceptionally strong :D

on Jul. 16 2012 at 11:42 pm
ShadowAngel2468 SILVER, Stroudsburg, Pennsylvania
7 articles 3 photos 70 comments
that was so amazing and insightful, the lack of worsd spoke volumes to me and i deeply appriceate tht, could u read a few of my things and give me some input?

on Jul. 16 2012 at 9:26 pm
Lissy.Frame BRONZE, Bradentom, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, and life to everything."

Really good! I love how it flows.

on Jul. 15 2012 at 4:55 pm
waterbendercarorain GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 249 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister
it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp

ohana means family no one gets left behind

amazing haiku 

on Jul. 15 2012 at 4:55 pm
AlmostPublished GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live for today,because yesterday is gone and tomarrow may never come.

This is one of the few poems that say very little yet mean more than the world. Very insightful #LOVEIT.

 


on Jul. 15 2012 at 4:14 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I'm usually not a big fan of hiakus, but I found this very insightful. I liked the idea of being muted.. I know how that could feel. Even though my life is pretty good, no one's life is perfect. This poem kind of brings that even more into the light for me. Hope you keep writing, loved it :))))

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jul. 12 2012 at 9:11 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Great poem. I found your message very helpful. I go to learn that at times we try to use our voice but know one hears. Suggestion: start with a hook


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