My Dad

June 27, 2012
By Commando BRONZE, Tumbi Umbi, Other
Commando BRONZE, Tumbi Umbi, Other
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From his vantage point
Guiding me through troubled times
Forever watching

Way up high now
Relaxing in paradise
Knowing he loves me

Now that he is gone
Not wanting to believe it
But it’s happened now

His book is finished
His page has been completed
But he is still there.

The author's comments:
My Dad passed away just before i turned 15, and we had to write a poem for an English assignment so i decided to do it about him.

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Totallynotme said...
on Jul. 16 2012 at 9:08 pm
This is a simply amazing Haiku. Brought a tear to this old boys tear ductless eyes. Brilliant work Commando, I applaude you


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