True Riches

June 20, 2012
By ClarinetPower SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
ClarinetPower SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Unfortunate souls
Scavenging for everything
They are rich at heart


The author's comments:
Sometimes we can't even begin to understand people.

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on Jan. 23 2013 at 7:42 pm
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD, Easton, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me." Phillipians 4:13

I can see what you were going for and I liked the idea of keeping it short and powerful, but the only real explanation of the piece I got was from your author comment and the last line. Maybe you could try and draw it out only a tiny bit more so that we can really get a sense of the poem. But it was nice and I enjoyed reading it :)


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