True Riches

June 20, 2012
Unfortunate souls
Scavenging for everything
They are rich at heart

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In_Love_with_Writing said...
Jan. 23, 2013 at 7:42 pm
I can see what you were going for and I liked the idea of keeping it short and powerful, but the only real explanation of the piece I got was from your author comment and the last line. Maybe you could try and draw it out only a tiny bit more so that we can really get a sense of the poem. But it was nice and I enjoyed reading it :)
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