Makeup's Shield

May 17, 2012
By pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 92 comments

Love, why must you shade
Your face with revolting goo?
I love you as you.



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on Oct. 31 2012 at 5:53 pm
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 92 comments
Thanks for the feedback! :)

on Oct. 31 2012 at 9:10 am
ChobaniLuvinPenguin PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What makes the desert beautiful is that somewhere it hides a well."
― Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince

Your poem is cute but can be viewed as serious at the same time. The only thing that I would change if I absolutely had to would be use a more powerful word instead of "goo." It seems somewhat playful and jokelike, but if that's what you were trying to get at, leave it. Great job!

on Sep. 4 2012 at 6:13 pm
pandagirl312 GOLD, Leawood, Kansas
19 articles 1 photo 92 comments
True. Thanks for the comment! :)

.king. SILVER said...
on Sep. 4 2012 at 6:59 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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lol, I iike how you describe Make-Up as goo, But I guess it's something that Many would not agree upon :/


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