Makeup's Shield

May 17, 2012
Love, why must you shade
Your face with revolting goo?
I love you as you.





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ChobaniLuvinPenguin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 9:10 am
Your poem is cute but can be viewed as serious at the same time. The only thing that I would change if I absolutely had to would be use a more powerful word instead of "goo." It seems somewhat playful and jokelike, but if that's what you were trying to get at, leave it. Great job!
 
pandagirl312 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 31, 2012 at 5:53 pm
Thanks for the feedback! :)
 
Silver2black said...
Sept. 4, 2012 at 6:59 am
lol, I iike how you describe Make-Up as goo, But I guess it's something that Many would not agree upon :/
 
pandagirl312 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 4, 2012 at 6:13 pm
True. Thanks for the comment! :)
 
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