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When 'Us' Begins.

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Hopelessly in love,
Waiting for that one moment,
Where you love me too.

When we stop being-
Friends, friends, nothing but friends yet-
When you and I become 'us.'

When will that day come?
I have no earthly idea.
But until that day--

I'll laugh at your jokes,
Smile when you are teasing,
And just wait for 'us.'




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Metal4LifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 10:02 pm:
This is so relatable for me as a reader! It defiantly hooked me in, as a fish on a hook. Job well done! You have great talents!
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becca.37This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:52 pm :
Thank you so much! I've actually been told my writing is horrific recently, and I nearly gave it up. Comments like this help keep me motivated to continue despite hate!
 
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shadowkiss96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 8:33 pm:
It's a pretty poem... Sorry I can't really provide you with more feedback, im not to great with haiku's
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becca.37This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:53 pm :
That's fine, I appreciate your positive encouragement!
 
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dragonsandthreeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 7:47 am:
This is another amazing haiku!
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becca.37This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
yesterday at 7:55 pm :
I actually didn't mean to write this one on haiku format- the stanzas just happened to flow that way!
 
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Laugh-it-OutThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 20 at 10:52 pm:
This is great: soo sweet! I love it <3 Keep rockin
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becca.37This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
yesterday at 5:37 am :
Thanks so much!
 
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iDani-iBeautyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 20 at 7:36 pm:
- Good Job ! It Was Short Sweet And To The Point . It Was Very Relatable And I Love The  Title And Picture !  Feedback Needed Please ! :)
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becca.37This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
yesterday at 5:39 am :
Thank you! I love the picture as well, I was so excited when I found it.
 
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Chichot123This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 20 at 10:52 am:
Simple, beautiful and easy to relate to. I love it!!! :D 
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becca.37This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
yesterday at 5:39 am :
Awesome, I'm glad you liked it and could relate! Thank you for reading :)
 
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