Drift Away

April 21, 2012
Custom User Avatar
More by this author
The heat of your skin
Your red lips tremble softly
Your eyes drift away

Join the Discussion

This article has 3 comments. Post your own now!

iCheeto This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2012 at 12:02 pm
I really like the whole poem :)  Nice job.
torilutz8 said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 8:52 am
Doesn't flow as nicely or feel as complete as your other haikus, but it's still nice.
IAmWhoIWantToBe said...
Apr. 28, 2012 at 10:22 pm
I think the first line didn't fit in this the two last lines. I'm like, "What's with the heat of his skin?" Anyway, I know it's not that easy to write a haiku. Anyway, keep writing. :)))
Site Feedback