Your heart beats faster
Your stomache has butterflies-
Amazing first kiss
Your stomache has butterflies-
Amazing first kiss
IAmWhoIWantToBeI don't know what to feel about this haiku since I haven't gotten my first kiss yet. Anyway, my criticism is that in the second line, do you mean stomach instead of stomache?
stomach --> body part
stomach ache --> pain in the stomach part
stomache --> ???
stomach --> body part
stomach ache --> pain in the stomach part
stomache --> ???
all throughout school, up until this year, i spelled it stomach but my english teacher marked it wrong on a paper and told me to look it up. in the dictionary, it had an e on the end. so idk which is right...
Now, that makes it confusing O.o Anyway, if that's what the dictionary says, then follow it...
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