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First Kiss

Your heart beats faster
Your stomache has butterflies-
Amazing first kiss




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IAmWhoIWantToBe said...
Apr. 23, 2012 at 11:25 pm:
I don't know what to feel about this haiku since I haven't gotten my first kiss yet. Anyway, my criticism is that in the second line, do you mean stomach instead of stomache?

stomach --> body part
stomach ache --> pain in the stomach part
stomache --> ???
 
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Apr. 25, 2012 at 9:31 am :
all throughout school, up until this year, i spelled it stomach but my english teacher marked it wrong on a paper and told me to look it up. in the dictionary, it had an e on the end. so idk which is right...
 
IAmWhoIWantToBe replied...
Apr. 26, 2012 at 2:05 am :
Now, that makes it confusing O.o Anyway, if that's what the dictionary says, then follow it...
 
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