I Wasn't the First

hey! i really don't know what to say about this one. see, the thing about haikus is that they all have a certain depth in them. this one is simply stated and if it wasn't for the title, i would have got really confused, although i do like the theme. this piece isn't bad but at the same time it is not your best one. but hey, every piece isn't a masterpiece, right ? keep writing :D