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Was the last to know
and STILL I don’t know…so tell
me---what wasn’t I?




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Josika.Nav said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 3:26 am:
hey! i really don't know what to say about this one. see, the thing about haikus is that they all have a certain depth in them. this one is simply stated and if it wasn't for the title, i would have got really confused, although i do like the theme. this piece isn't bad but at the same time it is not your best one. but hey, every piece isn't a masterpiece, right ? keep writing :D
 
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Jun. 4, 2012 at 3:58 pm :
Okay thanks for reading though :)
 
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