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Stellar Collision

Peaceful star with worlds
Collides with another star
Making a new sun



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CarrieAnn13 said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 9:04 pm
Dramatic, yet to the point, as haikus are meant to be.  Your syllable counting is, of course, spot-on and I like your choice of words.  "Collides" give the reader a very powerful mental image.  Excellent work!
 
bearsftw said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 2:10 pm
This is very interesting. Typically, haikus would be about something naturistic on Earth, but you described an action taking place outside of Earth. Nice! 
 
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