My heart is shattered,
Thousands of pieces implode.
Forever fractured.
Thousands of pieces implode.
Forever fractured.
Metal4Life
Ww this is very well put together! I typically don't care for haikus but this really mesmerized me! Very compelling!
Ha thank you I'm glad I made an exception for you!
dragonsandthreeThis is really good! I liked, which is pretty amazing since I don't like hakius.
Laugh-it-OutWow deep. I love this soo much, and the story behind it just gives it that extra mile. great job. Beautiful work you have soo far. Oh, and if it is not too much to ask, could you take a look at my haiku Winters Song, just want to know what you think! Brilliant job, keep rockin
Thank you so much! I know it's very short so I was a bit nervous it may seem lazy but I just love how sweet and poignant it is. I'd be glad to read your haiku!
A love haikus, they manage to have a deep message in just a couple of lines. This is exactly what you did in this poem. I love it :D
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Let me know if there's anything you would like me to look at for you :)
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