Shattered

April 11, 2012
By Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
-Edgar Allan Poe
(this summarizes my life)


My heart is shattered,
Thousands of pieces implode.
Forever fractured.


The author's comments:
A haiku for divorce; the inability to live without a parent, a parent who has gone forever.

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on May. 22 2013 at 9:14 pm
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
-Edgar Allan Poe
(this summarizes my life)

Thanks so much! It means a lot :)

on May. 21 2013 at 10:01 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. " FFDP "You're born alone and you die alone" FFDP "I wonder out where you can't see, inside my shell I wait and bleed." Slipknot " If youre 555 then I am 666"

Ww this is very well put together! I typically don't care for haikus but this really mesmerized me! Very compelling!

on May. 21 2013 at 7:49 pm
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
-Edgar Allan Poe
(this summarizes my life)

Ha thank you I'm glad I made an exception for you!

on May. 21 2013 at 7:44 am
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

This is really good! I liked, which is pretty amazing since I don't like hakius.

on May. 21 2013 at 5:41 am
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
-Edgar Allan Poe
(this summarizes my life)

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Let me know if there's anything you would like me to look at for you :)

on May. 21 2013 at 5:41 am
Rebecca.xx BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
4 articles 3 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
-Edgar Allan Poe
(this summarizes my life)

Thank you so much! I know it's very short so I was a bit nervous it may seem lazy but I just love how sweet and poignant it is. I'd be glad to read your haiku!

on May. 20 2013 at 10:58 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

Wow deep. I love this soo much, and the story behind it just gives it that extra mile. great job. Beautiful work you have soo far. Oh, and if it is not too much to ask, could you take a look at my haiku Winters Song, just want to know what you think! Brilliant job, keep rockin

on May. 20 2013 at 11:11 am
ChocolateLove SILVER, Warsaw, Other
5 articles 6 photos 158 comments
A love haikus, they manage to have a deep message in just a couple of lines. This is exactly what you did in this poem. I love it :D 


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