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Once upon a time
is how a fantasy starts…
ends with bankrupt dreams.




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Kiyoko This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 1:12 am:
"bankrupt dreams" is lovely!Concise and to the point. Well done!
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:20 am :
Thanks!!! ;)                            
 
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eternal_sunshine said...
Apr. 7, 2012 at 8:43 pm:
Nice job! You took something that has been done before, and you made it your own and very unique! I love the last line, "bankrupt dreams". How beautiful and fresh. Really lovely.
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:21 am :
Thank you very much!!!! :D
 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 7, 2012 at 8:38 pm:
True dat:) lol In fairy tales, there is always a happily ever after, but not in reality. I like the last line, in how this idea is expressed.
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 9:22 am :
Wish fairytales were real! thanks for reading!
 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 7, 2012 at 8:38 pm:
True dat:) lol In fairy tales, there is always a happily ever after, but not in reality. I like the last line, in how this idea is expressed.
 
poet100 replied...
Apr. 8, 2012 at 3:50 pm :
Awesome job playing with the classic cliche and turning it into something new and unexpected!!!
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 8:39 pm :
Thanks for reading!!!! Prince Charming is somewhere I just haven't met him yet!
 
JoPepperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 15 at 3:41 pm :
Thank you! xD
 
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