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The waking sunbeams
Paint our watchful, darkened sphere
Dare we close our eyes?





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ChobaniLuvinPenguin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 2, 2012 at 1:26 pm
I love it!!! Such a beatiful haiku! Although it is simply phrased, the wording is powerful and magical. Ironically, it makes you dare to close your eyes and imagine such a skyine! Amazing job!
 
albinotiger said...
Jul. 18, 2012 at 9:15 am
U r so creative and this poem is visulally beautiful!! (maybe check out my stuff sometime)
 
snowleopard100 said...
May 8, 2012 at 2:38 pm
I thoroughly love the idea of a "painted" skyline-so cool. Great haiku and really impressive. Keep it up!!!!
 
girly21 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2012 at 2:16 pm
This poem is very descriptive, I love it!
 
HoldingFast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 10, 2012 at 4:02 pm
I like it. I enjoy how you ended it in a question. Kinda short for me cuz i write longer stuff but it's still good (:
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 6, 2012 at 1:50 pm
An inspiring way to think of the skyline~ Splendid!
 
Shmelmo said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 4:52 pm
Cute! Short and Sweet - love it!
 
Simply Ciara said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 12:00 pm
I like this poem. Rated 5 stars
 
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