Skyline

April 3, 2012
By AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
AgentOrange789 GOLD, Friendswood, Texas
16 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a saying they have, that a man has a false heart in his mouth for the world to see, another in his breast to show to his special friends and his family, and the real one, the true one, the secret one, which is never known to anyone except to himself alone, hidden only God knows where."
-James Clavell, "Shogun"


The waking sunbeams
Paint our watchful, darkened sphere
Dare we close our eyes?


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on Nov. 2 2012 at 1:26 pm
ChobaniLuvinPenguin PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"What makes the desert beautiful is that somewhere it hides a well."
― Antoine de Saint-Exupéry, The Little Prince

I love it!!! Such a beatiful haiku! Although it is simply phrased, the wording is powerful and magical. Ironically, it makes you dare to close your eyes and imagine such a skyine! Amazing job!

on Jul. 18 2012 at 9:15 am
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win"- Stephen King
“In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate”- Isaac Asimov

U r so creative and this poem is visulally beautiful!! (maybe check out my stuff sometime)

on May. 8 2012 at 2:38 pm
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
33 articles 1 photo 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, but I took the one less traveled by, and that has made all the difference."

I thoroughly love the idea of a "painted" skyline-so cool. Great haiku and really impressive. Keep it up!!!!

on Apr. 28 2012 at 2:16 pm
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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This poem is very descriptive, I love it!

on Apr. 10 2012 at 4:02 pm
HoldingFast GOLD, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"If I wasn't meant to fly, I wouldn't have these wings"

I like it. I enjoy how you ended it in a question. Kinda short for me cuz i write longer stuff but it's still good (:

on Apr. 6 2012 at 1:50 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

An inspiring way to think of the skyline~ Splendid!

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on Apr. 5 2012 at 4:52 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Cute! Short and Sweet - love it!

on Apr. 5 2012 at 12:00 pm
Simply_Ciara GOLD, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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I like this poem. Rated 5 stars




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