The Natural Stream

March 21, 2012
It creeps through the woods
A narrow, winding channel
The shallow calm creek.

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DaisyAngel said...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 2:45 pm
I loved this! It is so pretty! I don't know if that is what you had intended, but that's what I thought. The words that you chose fit perfectly with the tone of the haiku. Keep it up! Will you read and comment on my poem "In a Room of Children" if you have the time?
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