The Lake

Ducks waddle about
Wild garlic grows along
The sides of the lake





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DaisyAngel said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 7:20 pm
I love haikus. For the most part, they are much less depressing than other poems. I especially liked yours, because you let it just be. It's nothing fancy; it's just a brief description of an image. This is why I love it. This poem is so fresh, and it let's my mind breathe a bit more. Will you give me feedback on my poem, if you have the time? I would really appreciate it! I want you to know that I didn't comment just to ask that question. I just feel like I might as well ask if I am alre... (more »)
 
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