Holding on for you.

March 14, 2012
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I waited all day,
For that special someone to
Take my breath away.

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DaisyAngel said...
Mar. 21, 2012 at 7:24 pm
I already said this about five seconds ago to another author, but it is so true. Haikus like this are so pure and simple. I always have questions after I read something like this, and I think that it would be great if you wrote a sequel. You could do a series of haikus commenting on this girl's expectations. If you have the time, will you consider reading my poem and commenting?
miaq96 replied...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 12:11 pm

of coarse it will be my pleasure...and thank you so much!! and please do see my other work...thank you once again for this lovely feedback:)


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