I waited all day,
For that special someone to
Take my breath away.
For that special someone to
Take my breath away.
DaisyAngelI already said this about five seconds ago to another author, but it is so true. Haikus like this are so pure and simple. I always have questions after I read something like this, and I think that it would be great if you wrote a sequel. You could do a series of haikus commenting on this girl's expectations. If you have the time, will you consider reading my poem and commenting?
of coarse it will be my pleasure...and thank you so much!! and please do see my other work...thank you once again for this lovely feedback:)
Join the Discussion
This article has 2 comments. Post your own!