Holding on for you.

March 14, 2012
By miaq96 SILVER, Karachi, Other
miaq96 SILVER, Karachi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
never run after success,be such a person that success runs after you.


I waited all day,
For that special someone to
Take my breath away.



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miaq96 SILVER said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 12:11 pm
miaq96 SILVER, Karachi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
never run after success,be such a person that success runs after you.

of coarse it will be my pleasure...and thank you so much!! and please do see my other work...thank you once again for this lovely feedback:)

 


on Mar. 21 2012 at 7:24 pm
DaisyAngel BRONZE, Sandy Springs, Georgia
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I already said this about five seconds ago to another author, but it is so true. Haikus like this are so pure and simple. I always have questions after I read something like this, and I think that it would be great if you wrote a sequel. You could do a series of haikus commenting on this girl's expectations. If you have the time, will you consider reading my poem and commenting?


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