Come, Hope

January 15, 2012
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Withered and old I
Am, but know, you will come and
Make me young once more

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Sparkle1pops This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 19, 2012 at 3:53 pm
This is great!  Th ecommas do distract me a little bit, but the idea is wonderful. 
LunaLives said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:31 pm
I wish all hakius were this easy to understand.
Writer_Jordan said...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 6:01 pm
Simple, short, and meaningful--such a deep haiku!
Blue4indigo replied...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 5:23 pm
Thank you!
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