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Withered and old I
Am, but know, you will come and
Make me young once more



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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 19, 2012 at 3:53 pm:
This is great!  Th ecommas do distract me a little bit, but the idea is wonderful. 
 
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LunaLives said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:31 pm:
I wish all hakius were this easy to understand.
 
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Writer_JordanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 6:01 pm:
Simple, short, and meaningful--such a deep haiku!
 
Blue4indigo replied...
Feb. 23, 2012 at 5:23 pm :
Thank you!
 
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