A Cold Chill

January 13, 2012
By beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt


Wrapped in Winter
An icy, unblinking stare
I shiver beneath.



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on Apr. 20 2012 at 5:20 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Cool, thanks~

 


on Apr. 19 2012 at 3:00 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I love how you display the act of being cold. I write haikus sometimes, but their not really my thing... I tend to get a little bound to the sylables instead of the actual poem. Nice work- I loved it.

on Apr. 8 2012 at 6:24 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Cool~ Hey thanks for reading so much of my stuff! I could use some fresh feedback.

butterfly123 said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 1:57 am
butterfly123, Banglore, Other
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hey! your language is extremely good. winter is personified so beautifully . great work and keep writing! XD

on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:22 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks for commenting~ Though I must admit that winter isn't my favorite season, and I was picturing an ice queen staring down at me, daring me to cross her, as I shivered beneath her harsh gaze. Sort of like a master and peasant sort of thing, I guess.

on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:11 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

This is really pretty. I am amazed to find that i like something that has to do with the cold so beautiful. Great job!

on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:33 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks for your comment!

on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:31 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks---I always pictured winter as some sort of ice queen with a icy personality to match.

FireIgnited said...
on Feb. 18 2012 at 10:05 am
FireIgnited, Valley City, North Dakota
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I like the way you describe winter, and your word choice is great. Nice job!

on Feb. 17 2012 at 1:32 pm
Kiki_McGee GOLD, Woodstock, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Hope is the thing with feathers that perches in the soul - and sings the tunes without the words - and never stops at all." - Emily Dickinson

I love how you personified winter. It just gave the poem so much more life.

on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:02 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thanks again! I thought personifying winter would make the poem a little different.

.Skyye. GOLD said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 2:37 pm
.Skyye. GOLD, Oroville, California
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Favorite Quote:
All I have seen teaches me to trust the Creator for all I have not seen.

I walk by Faith, not by sight

yay! This one is much more unique, I really like it :-)

on Feb. 3 2012 at 11:05 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you again for commenting!

on Feb. 3 2012 at 9:41 am
amahzing_grace GOLD, Prattville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
I pay no attention whatever to anybody's praise or blame. I simply follow my own feelings.
-Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart

this is really good (:

on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:22 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

No problem! (sorry if this posts twice) :) :(

on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:21 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

No problem! :)

on Jan. 28 2012 at 4:29 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Thank you for commenting~

on Jan. 28 2012 at 2:58 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
35 articles 0 photos 782 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

Good job, I really do like it especially the second line! :)




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