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Buzzards fly sky high,
Swarming something down below,
There has been a death.



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bookworm1000 said...
Jan. 10 at 9:16 am
Good poem!  It's very deep and you made every word count!
 
LunarBirthThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 20, 2013 at 10:02 am
I got chills!
 
TheEpic95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 29, 2013 at 9:41 pm
NICE!!!!!!!
 
White_Trash843 said...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 9:25 pm
love it great job!
 
chihuahuaz said...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 5:39 pm
Very Deep. Well Written :)
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 22, 2012 at 2:05 pm
Thank you :)
 
AwriterWithaPassion said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 6:41 pm
This is Really good ! It's Very Deep And I Love it . Keep Writing (:
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 21, 2012 at 3:39 pm
Thank you very much! Sorry for the late reply.
 
Angelgirl39 said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 1:59 pm
I love this hakui (spelling?) We just finished our poetry unit in class, and when I showed this to my teacher, she said it was amazing (all credit went to you, dont worry) Amazing job! Keep writing!
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 2:05 pm
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you really like it enough to show your teacher :). By the way, haiku
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 2:06 pm
is spelled like that. For some reason part of the comment cut off lol :P :-)
 
tealbird said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 9:51 am
Good work! You definitely have a knack (did I spell that right?) for poetry!
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 10:52 am
Thank you :)
 
fashionlover16 said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 8:35 am
this is really good!!!! keep writing!!!
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 8:42 am
Thank you, I will xD.
 
Aaka131 said...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 12:16 pm
This is great a lot of people have trouble writing haikus but yours is very nice and well thought out. Good job!
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 4:15 pm
Thank you. :).
 
readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 6:58 pm
Good, especially for a haiku. They seem so limited, but the good ones are amazingly deep :)
 
babyrex4 replied...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 1:31 pm
Thank you so much :D.
 
Kev-Girl said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 11:12 pm
Wow, I am surprised by how much I like this! I'm really not a haiku type of writer/reader, but I quite honestly like this. Five stars! :)
 
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