Buzzards fly sky high,
Swarming something down below,
There has been a death.
Swarming something down below,
There has been a death.
TheEpic95
White_Trash843
chihuahuazVery Deep. Well Written :)
AwriterWithaPassionThis is Really good ! It's Very Deep And I Love it . Keep Writing (:
Angelgirl39I love this hakui (spelling?) We just finished our poetry unit in class, and when I showed this to my teacher, she said it was amazing (all credit went to you, dont worry) Amazing job! Keep writing!
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you really like it enough to show your teacher :). By the way, haiku
is spelled like that. For some reason part of the comment cut off lol :P :-)
tealbirdGood work! You definitely have a knack (did I spell that right?) for poetry!
fashionlover16this is really good!!!! keep writing!!!
Aaka131This is great a lot of people have trouble writing haikus but yours is very nice and well thought out. Good job!
readaholic
Good, especially for a haiku. They seem so limited, but the good ones are amazingly deep :)
Kev-Girl said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 11:12 pm:
Jan. 30, 2012 at 11:12 pm:
Wow, I am surprised by how much I like this! I'm really not a haiku type of writer/reader, but I quite honestly like this. Five stars! :)
Thank you so much! I don't really like haikus either, but after I wrote this one, I like it!
AgingerWow, this is intense. I love those short poems that catch you by surprise and really get you thinking. Though very short, there is something very enchanting about your poem. Nice job!
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