Drain My Tears

One tear stained eye bleed.
Bright smile of one killing me soft.
Punishment for ones' failure.


Sweet redemption comes.
Pain ceases from deep with in.
Now, I live for you.





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WhiteWings said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:05 am
L.O.L I did put too many syllabols. I guess I was in the mode and sort of accidentally ignored the requierments. L.O.L
 
sandyflower replied...
Apr. 2, 2012 at 4:57 pm
i love it my love!!!! so very amazing in every way.
 
Blue4indigo said...
Jan. 19, 2012 at 3:19 pm
This was lovely as well, I really like the imagery in it. I like the second one especially! The first one, I believe had too many syllables in the last two lines. (not trying to be picky or anything...)
 
WhiteWings said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 2:20 pm
I love it. Everytime I read it. I love it more!!!!
 
poetidea_myworld_22 said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 1:27 pm
i love it!!!!!
 
Charlotte_Ryu said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 3:21 pm
DEEP! EMOTIONAL! AND BRILLIANT! :D KEEP ON WRITING YOU SMART WRITER YOU! :D
 
WhiteWings replied...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 1:41 pm
Thanks. Will do.
 
WhiteWings said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 3:13 pm
I like it more because I understand where I am coming from. I worry that others won't. I really love it.
 
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