Holding Hands

January 4, 2012
By SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).


The touch of our hands
Means everything to me
If only he knew...



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on Feb. 12 2012 at 10:41 am
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you so much!! (: When I wrote it I was thinking ev/er/y/thing - it's not the natural way of saying it, but it fits. (:

.king. SILVER said...
on Feb. 12 2012 at 10:37 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

I love it, Is it me or does the second line only sound like 6 syllables ? Love it very good, Awesomeness Talent !

on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:05 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

lol i was about to comment again...but then i was like, "wait, this poem sounds familiar..did i comment before?" and as it turns out i did...hehe...oh well...but the thing is...now i like it even more! :D 5/5 (again :P)

on Feb. 2 2012 at 8:35 am
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thanks so much, haikus are so amazing, and fun to write. (:

on Feb. 1 2012 at 8:31 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you so much! Haikus are amazing in the sense that they are so powerful in such few words. (:

on Feb. 1 2012 at 2:23 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
83 articles 23 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."





~Luara Moncur

Short sweet and to the point...very good. I feel the emotion that went into this..awesome!

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:27 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

Short and Sweet. I really can't write Haikus but you did a really nice job! Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?

on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:51 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
6 articles 15 photos 149 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind." -C.S. Lewis

[First of all, I like your username, it's cute. (:] Second, I love this poem so much. I am soooo bad at haikus, they're always such a challenge to make them sound good and not choppy. But I believe that someone just proved it's possible! This is great, keep it up!

on Jan. 15 2012 at 10:51 am
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you!! :D

on Jan. 15 2012 at 10:51 am
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thanks so much! :D

on Jan. 15 2012 at 9:03 am
RainingInParis1992, London, New York
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Aww thats so cute! :D

on Jan. 14 2012 at 1:56 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
7 articles 3 photos 42 comments
Ah!So beautiful yet so simple :*).AHHH I LOOOOVE IT!;D :3

on Jan. 13 2012 at 6:49 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you so much!! :D That's what I was trying to go for. Will do :)

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:54 pm
IdentityMangler PLATINUM, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
34 articles 3 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be kind. You never know whose fighting for their life.

That's cute and sad at the same time. Keep up the good work!!

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:46 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you! And your works are AMAZING, if I might add. :D

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:45 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you so much :D

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:45 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

That's why I LOOOOVE haiku poetry. Short, sweet, and to the point.. But yet so beautiful. Thanks (:

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:44 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you!! :D

on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:44 pm
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

Thank you so much! (: That's what I was going for, and your comment means so much to me. :D

on Jan. 9 2012 at 2:52 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
20 articles 3 photos 388 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you'll know it. I don't think you should wait. I think you should speak now." -Taylor Swift

aww...this is sad and sweet at the same time...i like it though, so 5/5 =)


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