The touch of our hands
Means everything to me
If only he knew...
Means everything to me
If only he knew...
Silver2black
I love it, Is it me or does the second line only sound like 6 syllables ? Love it very good, Awesomeness Talent !
Thank you so much!! (: When I wrote it I was thinking ev/er/y/thing - it's not the natural way of saying it, but it fits. (:
ShmelmoShort and Sweet. I really can't write Haikus but you did a really nice job! Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter?
scenesoccerqueenShort sweet and to the point...very good. I feel the emotion that went into this..awesome!
Thank you so much! Haikus are amazing in the sense that they are so powerful in such few words. (:
OfMuchHappiness[First of all, I like your username, it's cute. (:] Second, I love this poem so much. I am soooo bad at haikus, they're always such a challenge to make them sound good and not choppy. But I believe that someone just proved it's possible! This is great, keep it up!
Thanks so much, haikus are so amazing, and fun to write. (:
AshleaEnchantedAww thats so cute! :D
song-writer26Ah!So beautiful yet so simple :*).AHHH I LOOOOVE IT!;D :3
Thank you so much!! :D That's what I was trying to go for. Will do :)
SarakinsThat's cute and sad at the same time. Keep up the good work!!
JaneCapelle
aww...this is sad and sweet at the same time...i like it though, so 5/5 =)
Thank you so much! (: That's what I was going for, and your comment means so much to me. :D
lol i was about to comment again...but then i was like, "wait, this poem sounds familiar..did i comment before?" and as it turns out i did...hehe...oh well...but the thing is...now i like it even more! :D 5/5 (again :P)
cookiestar said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:30 am:
Jan. 8, 2012 at 7:30 am:
This is simple and sweet, yet powerful:)
readerwriter85This is so telling in so few words. Very simple and powerful and so ridiculously true.
That's why I LOOOOVE haiku poetry. Short, sweet, and to the point.. But yet so beautiful. Thanks (:
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