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Snowflakes

Little fragile flakes
Dancing through the frigid air
Turning the world white.



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Fire..This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 10:29 am:
I love Haikus and this is one of my favorites! good job!
 
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Choosing2Live4Christ said...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 11:47 am:
In Wisconsin it's the same with snow :D  but we have an early spring this year, however your Haiku is awesome  :D
 
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bass_rockrgrl13 said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 8:54 am:
The personification and vivid imagery add a nice touch! Well done!
 
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Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 7:57 am:
5,7,5, Beautiful, fragile snow fall, I agree the world does look some what white drowning in snow, I think the last line could be said a bit stronger !
 
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josika said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 12:07 pm:
so pretty! well written!
 
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Donutboy345 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 12:07 pm:
I like it, though I could do without the snow where I am. I never was much of a fan of haikus, either... But I like it!
 
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