January 6, 2012
Little fragile flakes
Dancing through the frigid air
Turning the world white.

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Fire.. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 9, 2012 at 10:29 am
I love Haikus and this is one of my favorites! good job!
Choosing2Live4Christ said...
Mar. 14, 2012 at 11:47 am
In Wisconsin it's the same with snow :D  but we have an early spring this year, however your Haiku is awesome  :D
bass_rockrgrl13 said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 8:54 am
The personification and vivid imagery add a nice touch! Well done!
Silver2black said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 7:57 am
5,7,5, Beautiful, fragile snow fall, I agree the world does look some what white drowning in snow, I think the last line could be said a bit stronger !
josika said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 12:07 pm
so pretty! well written!
Donutboy345 said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 12:07 pm
I like it, though I could do without the snow where I am. I never was much of a fan of haikus, either... But I like it!
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