Tears of frustration
Run down my cheeks because
You left without me
Run down my cheeks because
You left without me
beautifulspirit
I love that the haiku is really one sentence. It adds to its simplicity. And the poem is not so specific---like the speaker is upset because of a bad breakup or anything. Everyone can relate to lost or feeling sadness---it's universal.
Briana N. I love it! It is so simplistic, which is awesome, because it is very to the point. Yet it still manages to convey what you are trying to get it:) Keep writing!
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