Raining Eyes

January 2, 2012
Tears of frustration
Run down my cheeks because
You left without me

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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 2, 2012 at 7:06 pm
I love that the haiku is really one sentence. It adds to its simplicity. And the poem is not so specific---like the speaker is upset because of a bad breakup or anything. Everyone can relate to lost or feeling sadness---it's universal.
Briana N. said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 3:45 pm
I love it! It is so simplistic, which is awesome, because it is very to the point. Yet it still manages to convey what you are trying to get it:) Keep writing!
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