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December 29, 2011
By queer_fish SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
queer_fish SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
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Bold oil rainbow
In a sky of black asphalt
Strewn with pebble stars



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Blairezie GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 6:55 pm
Blairezie GOLD, Montrose, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"You must never give in to despair. When there is no hope, you give yourself hope. That is the true meaning of inner strength." -General Iroh

This is cool. Such a different style from your other work, though!

floragj GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 5:09 pm
floragj GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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This is really gorgeous imagery. I also adore the title - it has a great ring to it. Great work.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 1:31 pm
queer_fish SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
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Thanks so much. You are too kind. Nice vocab. I love the word "exquisite" :)

on Jan. 2 2012 at 1:29 pm
queer_fish SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
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Thank you! The title just came to me... I'm not sure it makes sense. Thanks so much for the feedback alwaysfallingfurther! :)

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:21 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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I really love your haiku! The imagery is exquisite, and I especially love the last line.

on Dec. 31 2011 at 10:48 pm
alwaysfallingfurther, Shavano Park, Texas
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I love the title! really cool imagery. great work! :)

on Dec. 31 2011 at 6:42 pm
queer_fish SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 26 comments
Thank you!

on Dec. 31 2011 at 6:41 pm
queer_fish SILVER, San Antonio, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 26 comments
Thanks for your feedback! Yup, I wrote this one day after seeing an oil rainbow at the supermarket parking lot. :)

on Dec. 31 2011 at 4:06 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Yeah I can picture myself looking at this sensation many times in a parking lot, wondering how it got to be that way~ Solid imagery.

on Dec. 31 2011 at 3:58 pm
Jumper008 SILVER, Exton, Pennsylvania
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I really like the imagery in this poem! Great job!


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