Bold oil rainbow
In a sky of black asphalt
Strewn with pebble stars
In a sky of black asphalt
Strewn with pebble stars
This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.
Polychrome Moan
BlairezieThis is cool. Such a different style from your other work, though!
floragj
This is really gorgeous imagery. I also adore the title - it has a great ring to it. Great work.
I really love your haiku! The imagery is exquisite, and I especially love the last line.
Thanks so much. You are too kind. Nice vocab. I love the word "exquisite" :)
I love the title! really cool imagery. great work! :)
Thank you! The title just came to me... I'm not sure it makes sense. Thanks so much for the feedback alwaysfallingfurther! :)
beautifulspiritYeah I can picture myself looking at this sensation many times in a parking lot, wondering how it got to be that way~ Solid imagery.
Thanks for your feedback! Yup, I wrote this one day after seeing an oil rainbow at the supermarket parking lot. :)
I really like the imagery in this poem! Great job!
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