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Battle of love

Love is a battle
A war of pain and hurting
Only time will heal pain




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eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 8:14 pm:
Good job, especially because haikus are hard because they're short and have a strict number of syllables. Although be wary of repeating words like "pain."
 
Michaelseanchavez replied...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 9:46 pm :
Yea had a hard time of thinking of another word. Probably going to do some more of these. Thanks for the advice though
 
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