Battle of love

December 26, 2011
Love is a battle
A war of pain and hurting
Only time will heal pain

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eliana924 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 8:14 pm
Good job, especially because haikus are hard because they're short and have a strict number of syllables. Although be wary of repeating words like "pain."
Michaelseanchavez replied...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 9:46 pm
Yea had a hard time of thinking of another word. Probably going to do some more of these. Thanks for the advice though
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