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Too Beautiful for this World

A class all your own
Untouchable, majestic
What style, such flair.

All an illusion
Unsolvable the secret,
behind your smile.

A dark side unseen,
Drowning pain, swallowing
so much sorrow.

Magic pills you ate
After so much ache and hurt,
you sleep forever.

My sweet darling,
Why did you have to end it?
Your life so precious.

So young, so vibrant
A princess misunderstood,
fighting her demons.

Sweet, I will miss you
A void vacant, you left
in my bleeding heart.



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BrokenBree said...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 8:41 pm:
This is my favorite piece of yours! So beautiful. Amazing job. Keep writing.
 
beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 9:20 pm :
Thanks for commenting~
 
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SkyyeTrekkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 2:50 pm:
This is beautiful. I absolutely love it! I love the message in it, and I love the words you used: flair, vibrant, illusion, class, majestic, I love it :-)
 
beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 4, 2012 at 5:05 am :
Thank you so much for commenting on so much of my work! It's so awesome hearing...well, reading what you think of my writing.
 
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