she's not poor

November 23, 2011
Chubby fingers strum
Strings of her mandolin
Hardship belies strength.

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queer_fish This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 7:07 pm
Whoa. Powerful poem, which is especially impressive given this is a haiku. I particularly like the imagery and the last line. Keep writing! Please rate / comment on my work. :)
poparteeb2 replied...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 7:28 pm
Thanks queer_fish! :)
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