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Stuck in the moment
with you I believe, that this
is not meant to be.

Forever I'll look
up to the bright shinning stars,
wishing for a sign.

Day in and day out,
it is all the same to me,
I'm stuck in this rut,

A sick fantasy,
a hopeful dream to come true.
I'm still stuck waiting.

Waiting for him to,
to come and call me his own,
his lovely flower,

his sweet little girl,
a blessing in his life that
completed his world.





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C.A.Walt This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 9:01 am
i love the truth in this!!! it's amazing=)
 
LiberianBadd said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 10:11 am
I really enjoyed this!!! GREAT WORK!!
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 3:39 pm
thanks so much. im glad you liked it. =]
 
pinkowl said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:25 pm
awh, very cute, i love this! i love the passion in it!
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:48 pm
thanks. i liked how it turned out
 
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 3:57 pm
Wow.  I've always admired haiku writers...
 
RebeccaJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Dec. 1, 2011 at 6:46 pm
haha me too. They can be easy sometimes. No lie i wrote this is like 3 min. i just typed it. I didn't even write it in my notebook first
 
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